I present to you a 30 second tv commercial I wrote on a whim. The names of the companies have been changed to protect my bottom. All you really need to know is that "Myer" is a retail store and "Scotty" is, well that one's more obvious.
Myer “The Difference” : 30 Television
SFX: Birds chirping, shopping carts rolling.
FADE-IN MS: Myer Garden Center EXT a husband at wife is facing the Myer and “Scotty” Fertilizer in the pallet racking. Behind the couple is a tree pit.
WIFE: So which one should be get?
MCU: Husband
HUSBAND: Um.
MCU: Wife
WIFE; Well, which one is better?
MS: Hudband and Wife
HUSBAND: Well I-
FS: Man enter stage right.
MAN: Well this one (pointing to the Myer brand) gives my grass thick roots.
FS: Man exit stage left. Woman with shopping cart enter stage left.
WOMAN: Well this one (pointing to the Scotty brand) makes my lawn green.
FS: Woman exit stage right.
CU: Husband, confused.
HUSBAND: So what’s the difference?
MS: Husband and Wife.
SFX: Tress rustling.
INSTERT SHOT: Trees behind the couple begin to move and a young female Myer employee pokes her head out.
MYER EMPLOYEE: About $5.50.
MS: Myer employee begins to recede back into the trees.
FS: Husband and Wife look at each other with apprehension.
FADE-OUT
FADE-IN: Myer logo and slogan appear.
ANNCR: Myer, higher ethics lower costs.
If anyone has comments to make please do so. Or know of job opportunities, or have the ability to employ me. Also I may or may not create a storyboard of this commercial later.
